Can You Hear Me?

Logline:

Phil takes revenge on Katie who turned him down.

Cast: 2

Length - Four pages

Aphasia

Logline:

Rob suddenly finds it hard to speak.  He believes he's understood.  But the words he thinks he's saying, aren't what people hear.

Length: 

5 pages

Cast: 

Five

XY

Logline:

Tom wants to ask Mike a question regarding a double date they went on; the previous year.  Believing Mike had played a prank on him.  He seeks revenge before hearing what Tom has to say.

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Wrote this story with three different endings.  Pages 5 & 6 are different.

Version 1

Version 2

Version 3

Length -

Version 1 - Six pages

Version 2 - Five pages

Version 3 - Five pages

Cast - 

Version 1 - 3

Version 2 - 3

Version 3 - 3

The Ten Commandments

Logline:

Jack tries to remember the ten commandments unaided.  But struggles to remember and realises he might not be as religious or christian as he thinks.

Length - Three pages

Cast: 3

Poison Pen (Radio Sketch)

Logline:

Dick wants to send a message to someone he hates.  But struggles to get anywhere with the florist.  Who he eventually hates as well.

Cast: TWO

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This is a comedy sketch I've created for BBC Radio.  Hopefully this'll go down well.

Inappropriate

Logline:

When the Pilot makes his announcements, he makes Michael, a nervous flier, freak out.

Length ~ 3 pages

Cast ~ 5 (four speaking roles)

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I'm thinking I could write a series of these inappropriate moments.

Winner! - Los Angeles Feedback Film & Screenplay Festival - June

Here's a snippet of the email I received in regards to my winning screenplay.  My Rick and Morty Script called What Have You Learnt Morty?

Budget Friendly 'TAG' / 'LABEL' word

"If you want creativity, take a zero off your budget. If you want sustainability, take off two zeros."

Jamie Lerner 

I'm going to start adding a new tag to search for budget friendly scripts.  Easy to film.


I'll look at both, geography, buildings, and characters.

• CHARACTERS

No more than five.

• BUILDINGS

I'll keep an open mind on this.  A home/house with multiple rooms I'll see as budget friendly.  Other buildings might not be so easy like a warehouse or church.  It all depends since all towns/cities may not have all these kinds of buildings.

Also, a script may include multiple buildings, so perhaps no more than three would be good.

• GEOGRAPHY

Not all places have rivers or lakes, deserts or mountains.  So I'll keep this in mind if locations would indicate a dramatic change in scenery.

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N.B.

If there's anything else I think of or you believe I should include in my parameters.  Please let me know.

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Guilt and Revenge

Logline:

George needs to get something off his chest.  But doesn't foresee the consequences.

Length ~ 4 pages

Cast ~ 3

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Another rewrite.

This script was originally created in 2008.

The Abortion Clinic

Logline:

A young lady goes to an abortion clinic only to be challenged by the doctor for her intentions and asked insensitive questions.

Length: Five pages

Cast: 3

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I wrote this story ten years ago in 2008.  It has now been picked to become part of a university's school curriculum for Ateneo de Davao University of the Philippines.

I've updated the script given it a much needed makeover.  Think of it as an absurd dramedy.

Rick and Morty - Science Versus Magic

Logline:

Jerry finally finds a job he's actually good at, but this upsets Beth because of his assistants, and annoys Rick who uses science to prove magic isn't what it seems to be.

Length ~ 30 pages

Cast ~ 16